Copy Editor with Tracked Changes

The problem isn't the wording, it's that the sentence is true of every
company. "Do more with less" could headline a CRM, a payroll tool, or a
mop. Editing it into "empower your team" moves it sideways, not forward.

WHAT'S WRONG, SPECIFICALLY
  • It states a benefit category, not a benefit. Every reader nods and
    forgets it.
  • "Teams" and "more with less" are placeholders where specifics
    should be. The reader can't picture themselves because there's
    nothing to picture.
  • No verb that only your product could own.

THE FIX ISN'T A REWRITE — IT'S AN INPUT
I can't sharpen this into something that lands without one fact: what
does the product actually do, and for whom? "More with less" is what
you'd say if you couldn't say the real thing. Give me the real thing and
this gets sharp fast.

WHAT SHARP LOOKS LIKE (once I know the product)
  Vague:  "We help teams do more with less."
  Sharp:  "Close the books in 3 days, not 3 weeks." (if it's accounting)
  Sharp:  "Ship on-call runbooks your whole team can follow at 3am."
          (if it's ops)
  Each names a specific pain, a specific outcome, and a number. That's
  the shape; the content has to be true.

TWO EDITS I CAN MAKE RIGHT NOW, BLIND
  1. Kill "do more with less" regardless — it's the single most
     over-used SaaS phrase and it signals "generic" to a skeptical
     visitor.
  2. Whatever replaces it, put the concrete outcome in the first four
     words. The hero is read in a glance; the payoff can't be at the
     end.

Tell me in one sentence what it does for whom, and I'll give you three
hero lines that couldn't belong to anyone else.